i'm gonna be honest
now i think you have promise so i'll be totally honest so you can learn and grow from it. i liked the story, but it moved to slow and some parts are pretty random, like the water creature randomly being in the background and say "oh look theres water back here, i love water, i'm a water creature!" alright sure we now know hes a water creature but its quite a weird way to introduce that fact. Nextly animation i thought it was animated well, the sprites were a bit jumpy and it was obvious you aligned all of them to the head of the sprite, but in some cases, like raje it doesn't look good when you do that. next being sprites, it was nice you had a plethera of interesting and original sprites, but some were edited quite badly, or with little care to detail. Next every time you introduced an interesting or all powerful chatracter other than exodus you destroyed them.... whats up with that? anyhow nextly speech bubbles, while names were helpful i had no idea who was talking unless only 2 people were in the screen at the same time. Last but not least, the battle system seemed very forced i mean there was really no way to lose, it feels like you only put it in to give people a sense that they could control it. anyhow i hope all this helps, good luck in the future